Some of the things which I have been advised on it that:
- The scenery shots were good however there are too many and I need to take some out.
- It was odd that the boy is shown getting out of bed already in his clothes.
- Some of the shots taken in the bed room were blurry and out of focus. These are the shots in which I am going to reshoot.
- Wake up scene is overused so should taken out and replaced with him just getting ready and heading out.
- I am also going to take some new shots of him watching and his mum shouting at him as I want the opening to have more conflict and excitement so to further hook the audience to watch more of it.
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